Class Today

I'm really glad that we did the peer editing today. I got really good feedback that I can use to improve my essay(thanks em and bree!). There were a lot of things pointed out in my essay that if I had just read it myself I wouldn't have found, but make a lot of sense. Hopefully when I make the changes it will make my essay a lot easier to understand. So just to be clear, we have to have our rough draft sent to her by saturday... ? I wasn't sure if I heard her right.

critical analysis essay

well, I wrote my essay and didn't really revise it at all before today. So then in class when we read them outloud it sounded really bad. I just hope people can help me fix it.

here comes the boom.

so yeah, its me mallory... blogging at 1:30 at night because well im a devoted student. this essay; not as hard as i was making it seem before i started. actually got easier like kaitlin said once i started. when then towards the end.. got some writers block and didnt know how to make my paper keep going, so when any of you read it tomorrow (errr today?) and feel its drags on, yeah thats my bad... just keep going through it and eventually you get to the lovely end, maybe not so lovely. whatever you can take it how you want, (thats what he said) ha. sorry i just had too, dont be mad stariha.. cause you know your laughing thinking i just read your mind. ok, ok, enough with the dirty thoughts and lets get back to my great essay. well yeah i think my favorite part about it is my title, dont know why.. just kinda feel like its deep. yeah thats what it is.. deep. now im done talking about my essay, that was fast.. so now i think i should head to bed to im able to stay awake during class tomorrow and read my essay to whoever stariha puts me with (not the smart kids, well ok maybe one.. but thats all(please)) and dont worry guys, ill dress to impress.. who are we kidding i do already. ha :) niiiiiight guys!