Thursday, May 5, 2011

critical analysis essay

well, I wrote my essay and didn't really revise it at all before today. So then in class when we read them outloud it sounded really bad. I just hope people can help me fix it.

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  1. haha yeah.. you must have been wearing those goggles when writing this essay. lol

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  2. Kody I was in the same boat as you. I was putting it off all week and then Wednseday night I just put a random bunch of words down on my paper and hoped that it would pass for a critical essay. But the peers were a lot of help!

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  3. haha meg thats the same with me and i wrote it pretty fast but maddie and sarah said it was pretty good writing it that quickly. they helped me alot though so im glad we did the peer editing

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  4. Did Maddie and Sarah tell you that a lot is TWO words? :)

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